Second Quarter Portfolio (1st Semester)

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Argumentative Letter

Dear Department of Education,

I have enjoyed going to school and seeing my friends and learning in class. But since I have reached high school, there is a concern I have and hopefully you will put this into consideration.

Like in my elementary I was covered in air condition in every class I had to make it a comfortable and enjoyable environment. As I progressively got older and going into middle school and now high school air conditioners were gone and there were only fans that most teachers bought to make learning more comfortable. I am purposing that all classrooms at every school should have air conditions.

How can the state expect us to do well in class or on computerized tests such as the HSA when we are not in a comfortable and cool environment. I believe that if there are installments of aid conditioners, students will become more on task.  Students will also become more calm while taking tests instead of rushing through it and wanting to get out of class immediately.

I continue to come to school with some classes with air conditioners but in other classes it is an uncomfortable learning environment. I hope you at least take this in consideration and try to pull out money from funds and accept my request. If this is too big of a request maybe more fans can be an alternative choice in making school a wonderful environment to learn in.

Risky Business Final

  Teens get their selves into “risky business” that can jeopardize their future. One that pops out to people is Teen Suicide. Teen suicide is a major issue in the United States that increases yearly due to a down point in ones life. These suicidal thoughts need to be addressed  immediately. Such things that can trigger a suicidal attempt are family history of it, depression, and substance abuse.

      People  may think suicide is not the right way to go. But that’s just their perspective. Put your self in the suicidal persons shoes. They might have been depressed and wants to just be free after all the torture he/she has been through.  Also people might not think that suicide is a big deal because they think that once someone dies another person comes in the world or that they think the world is overpopulated and is fine with people dying. They probably only think that way because a tragic death to them never happened to them before.  But on the other hand it is a major deal for others. Every 16 minutes someone dies from suicide. Averaging to about 32,000 people each year. People deserve to live life to the fullest and seek help if they are having troubles in life.

        Secondly suicide is increasing in both genders now and the ages are specific to the teens age group. Teens might just want to let go and not thinking before their actions. Many teens are going to be successful in life so why stop it at a young age. Suicide is treatable and with help, you can turn your life around drastically. So teens should think before they do things and also realize who you are going to be affecting with your decisions.

       Most suicidal attempts are due to depression in their life such as a death to someone close to them. Although it might be hard to let go, but it’s the right thing to do. You can’t hold your self accountable or keep on asking questions. Life is greater than that and it shouldn’t be ended early for any causes.

       With suicide rates increasing rapidly we need to find a cure. Think about it, every 16 minutes someone dies from committing suicide. People need to be careful on what we say and what we do because they never know if they're causing someone to have suicidal thoughts or even committing suicide. 

Risky Business Draft

  Teens get their selves into “risky business” that can jeopardize their future. One that pops out to me is Teen Suicide. Teen suicide is a major issue in the United States that increases yearly due to a down point in ones life. These suicidal thoughts need to be addressed  immediately. Such things that can trigger a suicidal attempt are family history of it, depression, and substance abuse. 

     Many may think suicide is not the right way to go. But that’s just the perspective of someone else. Put your self in the suicidal persons shoes. They might have been depressed and wants to just be free after all the torture he/she has been through. So that may be a reason why people think suicide isn’t that big of a deal. On the other hand it is a major deal for me. Every 16 minutes someone dies from suicide. Averaging to about 32,000 people each year. People deserve to live life to the fullest and seek help if they are having troubles in life.

     Secondly suicide is increasing in both genders now and the ages are specific to the teens age group. Teens might just want to let go and not thinking before their actions. Many of us teens are going to be successful in life so why stop it at a young age. Suicide is treatable and with help, you can turn your life around drastically. So think before you do things and also realize who you are going to be affecting with your decisions.

        Most suicidal attempts are due to depression in ones life such as a death to someone close to you. Although it might be hard to let go, but it’s the right thing to do. You can’t hold your self accountable or keep on asking questions. Life is greater than that and it shouldn’t be ended early for any causes.

            With suicide rates increasing rapidly we need to find a cure. Think about it, every 16 minutes someone dies from committing suicide. We need to be careful on what we say and what we do because you never know, you might be causing someone to have suicidal thoughts or even committing suicide.

College Prompt Final

University of Oregon: The UO is interested in learning more about you. Write an essay of 500 words or less that shares information that we cannot find elsewhere on your application. Any topic you choose is welcome. Some ideas you might consider include your  future ambitions and goals, a special talent or unusual interest that sets you apart from your peers, or a significant experience that influenced your life.


     Time is flying by passing day by day and life is starting to get real. With goals and future ambitions to pursuit and researching colleges to go to, I become more of and adult with tasks to do rather than a kid in middle school scattered in life. Being an athletic child from the age of six years old , sports will always be there in my life. From swimming to cross country, football to basketball, and soccer decorating me in all different areas, these sports helped guide me into wanting to major in Physical Therapy.

At the University of Oregon knowing you have a outstanding sports program, there is no doubt that you have excellent Physical Trainers and Therapist that keep the sports teams running and in the best shape to get on the field or court. With learning and getting my major, I want to go to the professional level and get signed by a sports team so I can be their Physical Therapist.

With my degree I intend to come back to Hawai'i and sign up for an internship with a physical trainer or sign with a high school to help athletes. After spending a few years here I will learn the knew techniques and technology to recovering players. Then when I can manage to do it on my own I will move to the mainland and sign with a local team and get my name out there.
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With big decisions coming up in the near future and dreams and goals coming closer and closer I am set and ready to graduate and work my way up into majoring in Physical Therapy. I am glad I was an athletic child because I wouldn't know what to major in. Nothing sticks out to me more than sports does and I just want to give back to recovering athletes with something I grew up doing.

1: The Father
The soldier, but more importantly a father has come home from his 8 month deployment. His children eager and astonished to see him dashed in for a heart warming hug. With a part of his life taken away for more than half a year the loving father feels reunited once again with his family. He cherishes everyday with the loves of his life before he has to leave again.

2: Volleyball 
With match point and another gold medal up in the air for the American duo, the whistle blows for the serve.  With Amy serving for the game she throws it up. With the crowd in awe and watching the ball contact her hand they are eagerly awaiting Team USA's 500th win. "Smack" and ace over the net for a historic win. Not only their 500th win but yet another gold medal to their collection.

3: The Woman
She raised the gun with her shaky hands, and stared directly to my eyes. "I told you not to trust me," she purred. I should have known better than to let a stranger come into my home, but then again, she was an attractive, beguiling snake. Come on, think straight, I thought to myself as I remembered that my life was in her hands.

Frigid: I continued to walk, pulling my books closer to my chest. I knew someone, or something, was following me. The cold air and stillness of the trees compelled me to walk faster. You'll be fine, I thought to myself, but that thought soon seemed to be impossible when I heard and inhumane growl behind me. My skin prickled with fear as I turned around. It was black, resembled the looks of a wolf, and was

Pessimistic: Just a bit longer. Just a bit longer, and it'll all be over. I never wanted to have this birthday party in the first place. I'm thirteen years old; birthday parties are for children. My mom just had to call everyone from my class and invite them over for a "celebration". I don't consider this a celebration if I'm not having any fun. Shaking my legs and fidgeting with my hands, I get antsy for this cursed party to end.
   

College Prompts

UH MANOA

1. Community or Volunteer Service—– Complete an essay describing what activities you participated in (i.e. any activities including volunteer, leadership, membership and community services in social, school or community organizations which demonstrate your willingness to give back or contribute to your community).
2. Commitment to Heath Care—Complete an essay describing what activities related to Health Care that you participated in (i.e. demonstrated commitment to health care, volunteer work, employment in health services, enrolled in a degree program in any area of health fields; career goals and plans in the health care field regardless of area of study; how you intend to impact the health of your community in the State of Hawai‘i.)
3. 442nd Veterans Endowed Scholarship—Complete an essay describing the role of the 442nd Regimental Combat Team of the United States Army in World War II and their legacy.

UNIVERSITY OF OREGON

     Submit an application essay

     The UO is interested in learning more about you. Write an essay of 500 words or less that shares information that we         cannot find elsewhere on your application. Any topic you choose is welcome. Some ideas you might consider include your  future ambitions and goals, a special talent or unusual interest that sets you apart from your peers, or a significant experience that influenced your life.

OREGON STATE UNIVERSITY

• Understanding of you as a unique, contributing individual.
• Your accomplishments, perspectives, experiences, and talents.
• Your achievements within the context of your social and personal circumstances.
• Participation in activities that develop academic, intellectual, and leadership abilities.

Coming of Age Poster

Coming Of Age Final

     Winter Season was coming up, scrolling down the list with multiple sports to choose from to represent Moanalua High School. All of the sports seemed really intriguing but I didn't know how to play any of them. Until I stumbled upon soccer. I have been playing soccer for about 10 years now and I thought it would be an honor to play Varsity level soccer for high school. Then it all started to crumble down.

     "Boys Varsity Soccer Tryouts, boys varsity soccer tryouts will be held today after school. Be ready with your cleats , shinguards, and water. See you there!" That phrase on the morning bulletin was ringing in my head all day. Focused and determined to get a spot on the team. Practicing and conditioning for months now made me feel that I was in the best shape I ever was in and made me think I guaranteed had a spot on the team. Looking back at it today, made me look super cocky and arrogant. 

     As day one of three finished from tryouts I felt really good on my performance. My skill level was there and it was going well. When upperclassmen who made the team last year acknowledged me saying that I was one of the better ones of the group it boosted my self-asteam and my head rose so high. When day two came for tryouts, I wasn't worried in school no more. I thought I had it in the bag. I walked to the field with a high sense of swagger like I was a soccer legend right after the bell rang. I slacked off thinking I made the team already, walking through drills and fooling around. With the coaching knowing my name I thought that it was a good sign that he liked me.

     Day three was finally here. Excited as ever and anxious for the school day to finish. He said that right after a light practice he will read the list of names who made the team. 1:45 came and I scurried out the room. Practice went on and it was a light scrimmage. With me executing passes and scoring a goal, I just wanted to finish and hear my named be called from the list. No more than 5 minutes passed and practice had ended. We all ran up the bleachers and waited for coach to come up and read the list. He said before he read the names that he was taking about 25 people. At that point I thought that my chances of making it was 25 of 25. After 20 names were called, I was anxious and telling my "teammates" here we go I am next! Then all of a sudden he stopped. I was so confused. I started asking everyone if they heard my name. "Congratulations to the boys who made it, if your name was not called than sorry we couldn't take you." I dashed into his office and said "Coach how come my name wasn't called?" "Shimo you had the talent and the skill level was all there, but your just to small."

Devastated and sobbing I rushed out the office, went home and cried my eyes out.

     This experience affected me emotionally and physically because every time I would play soccer, I felt like I wasn't good enough. Skipping meals and not doing much set me back but I just had to let it go and learn from this. During the off-season for me while the soccer team was still playing, I would watch their games and learn the style of play and take notes on what I can improve so I can make the team this upcoming year. Working out and eating 4-5 meals a day made me stronger and made me maintain my weight and still manage to be in shape.

     Being cut from the Varsity soccer team was definitely a horrible experience but a memorable on too. It was a set back yet a learning experience. Entering this upcoming year as a Sophomore I learned from my mistakes and gained knowledge on how to make the team. From being to "small" I grew 4 inches and gained weight to help me in tryouts.  With family support, determination, perseverance, and staying humble you can achieve anything. Hopefully all goes well so I can represent Moanalua HIgh School and be on the Varsity Soccer Team.

Coming Of Age Draft

     Winter Season was coming up, scrolling down the list with multiple sports to choose from to represent Moanalua High School. All of the sports seemed really intriguing but I didn't know how to play any of them. Until I stumbled upon soccer. I have been playing soccer for about 10 years now and I thought it would be an honor to play Varsity level soccer for high school. Then it all started to crumble down.

     "Boys Varsity Soccer Tryouts, boys varsity soccer tryouts will be held today after school. Be ready with your cleats , shinguards, and water. See you there!" That phrase on the morning bulletin was ringing in my head all day. Focused and determined to get a spot on the team. Practicing and conditioning for months now made me feel that I was in the best shape I ever was in and made me think I guaranteed had a spot on the team. Looking back at it today, made me look super cocky and arrogant.  

     As day one of three finished from tryouts I felt really good on my performance. My skill level was there and it was going well. When upperclassmen who made the team last year acknowledged me saying that I was one of the better ones of the group it boosted my self-asteam and my head rose so high. When day two came for tryouts, I wasn't worried in school no more. I thought I had it in the bag. I walked to the field with a high sense of swagger like I was a soccer legend right after the bell rang. I slacked off thinking I made the team already, walking through drills and fooling around. With the coaching knowing my name I thought that it was a good sign that he liked me.

     Day three was finally here. Excited as ever and anxious for the school day to finish. He said tat right after a light practice he will read the list of names who made the team. 1:45 came and I scurried out the room. Practice went on and it was a light scrimmage. With me executing passes and scoring a goal, I just wanted to finish and hear my named be called from the list. No more than 5 minutes passed and practice had ended. We all ran up the bleachers and waited for coach to come up and read the list. He said before he read the names that he was taking about 25 people. At that point I thought that my chances of making it was 25 of 25. After 20 names were called, I was anxious and telling my "teammates" here we go I am next! Then all of a sudden he stopped. I was so confused. I started asking everyone if they heard my name. "Congratulations to the boys who made it, if your name was not called than sorry we couldn't take you." I dashed into his office and said "Coach how come my name wasn't called?" "Shimo you had the talent and the skill level was all there, but your just to small."

Devastated and sobbing I rushed out the office, went home and cried my eyes out.

     It was the worst night ever but the most memorable. From being cut from the soccer team it was a wonderful example of being humble and grounded. You have to expect the unexpected. I thought for sure I had a spot on the team. But being cocky and arrogant lead me to believe way to much in my self. Since the incident I grew over 4 inches and been gaining weight and working out harder than ever. I stay humble and just keep on working. Entering this year as a sophomore, determined and not cocky, I am going to tryout again and hopefully all goes well. With family support, determination, and staying humble you can achieve anything.

Position Statement Mini Essay

3. Naturally, adults have a better understanding of the consequences of their actions. Also, these people should have known better than to do weird things in a place they didn't know properly. Your conscience should be able to keep you from straddling a blowhole.

Naturally, adults have a better understanding of the consequences of their actions.These people should have known better than to do dumb things in a place they are not aware and experts of. The government should not be responsible for what these people do, their conscience should be able to keep you away from straddling a blowhole.

The people who were involved in the accidents were obviously reckless and risk-takers. Unfortunitly the victims passed away, but they need to be more cautious of their surroundings. David Potts fell into a blowhole after dancing around it. At age 44 he should have made better decisions, especially because he was an adult. The only warning the site had provided was hand painted on a rock, however neither the Maui VIsitors Bureau and Maui County had promoted the area as an attraction. 18-year-old Daniel Dick straddled a blowhole, was lifted 3-5 feet, and landed head first onto a rocky crevice, which led to his death. Even though the warning sign was far from the actual site, some common sense would have been able to keep Daniel from doing what he did. Also what is he doing straddling a blowhole? Obviously its dangerous because water is going to blow out of the hole, so why even be near it? Even though there was lack of warnings in the both cases, the accidents could have been prevented if the two victims were cautious and had common sense.

Just because the government had not put up many warning signs for the blowholes, people should know better not to full around in a place they are not aware of. Since most of these victims were adults they should know better than anyone else. Why put your life in risk in a place you are so unfamiliar with? People need to be more cautious of the surroundings and make better decisions.

Revision Process

The changes I made to my blog was obviously my header and title. I named it the untold because people don't know that much about me and this year hopefully we get to do essays on ourselfs or our opinions. I also put a picture of a mouth taped because it shows how things were kept in. I used my skills and added the title on the design. I alo organized my archieve by putting it by the year then later seperated by months. I find that it will be easy to find old work and it will easily show when I completed it

Invitation to GLO Portfolio

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Of Mice and Men Photoshop

Graphic Card FInal

Metaphor Poem Final

I am like a silverman street performer

Quiet, but yet trying to make people laugh

Unfazed by anything that comes my way

And seriously composed

Always energetic at night

And out when the stars shine bright

Being friendly and dependent is the way I live

Relying on people to give,

But my talent makes people laugh

It is my art and craft

Mellow in the day, 

But charasmatic at night

I am like a silverman 

So here I stand

Graphic Card

Metaphor Poem

I am like a silverman street performer

Quiet, but yet trying to make people laugh

Unfazed with anything that comes my way

And seriously composed

Always energetic at night

And out when the stars shine bright

Being friendly and dependent is the way I live

Relying on people to give,

But my talent makes people laugh

It is my art and craft

Mellow in the day, 

But energetic at night

I am like a silverman 

So here I stand