Teens get their selves into “risky business” that can jeopardize their future. One that pops out to me is Teen Suicide. Teen suicide is a major issue in the United States that increases yearly due to a down point in ones life. These suicidal thoughts need to be addressed immediately. Such things that can trigger a suicidal attempt are family history of it, depression, and substance abuse.
Many may think suicide is not the right way to go. But that’s just the perspective of someone else. Put your self in the suicidal persons shoes. They might have been depressed and wants to just be free after all the torture he/she has been through. So that may be a reason why people think suicide isn’t that big of a deal. On the other hand it is a major deal for me. Every 16 minutes someone dies from suicide. Averaging to about 32,000 people each year. People deserve to live life to the fullest and seek help if they are having troubles in life.
Secondly suicide is increasing in both genders now and the ages are specific to the teens age group. Teens might just want to let go and not thinking before their actions. Many of us teens are going to be successful in life so why stop it at a young age. Suicide is treatable and with help, you can turn your life around drastically. So think before you do things and also realize who you are going to be affecting with your decisions.
Most suicidal attempts are due to depression in ones life such as a death to someone close to you. Although it might be hard to let go, but it’s the right thing to do. You can’t hold your self accountable or keep on asking questions. Life is greater than that and it shouldn’t be ended early for any causes.
With suicide rates increasing rapidly we need to find a cure. Think about it, every 16 minutes someone dies from committing suicide. We need to be careful on what we say and what we do because you never know, you might be causing someone to have suicidal thoughts or even committing suicide.
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You need to add more in your opposite position because there is very minimum stuff in it like people saying suicide isn't the right way to go out you need facts but other than that it was good.
ReplyDeleteDo not write in first or second person. This is should be third person. You need to include more research (evidence to support your ideas). Also much of your discussion is not complete it is brief and doesn't tell us anything new. And as dylan said you need to add more to the opposing side. AS(2)
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